Learner response & Self Assessment grade
Self Assessment grade:
E/D because my paragraph do not flow into the next
Learner response(set by Mr BUSH):
- Redraft my writing & Check for accuracy
- Link paragraph together
- Develop conclusion to answer question
- More books
Learners Response (set by peers):
- Include more representation, when giving point give more explanation
- Use more links to genre and narrative
- Use more historical and economical links to the texts
- Debate the point that I am making then, Include moral panic and global media and news values
- Talk about liberal pluralism and different views and link the reception theory.
- More books & capitalisation
- Add books to work consulted and fix moving image section
- Include a cultivation quote ( research)
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